read short stories
Remember that Storystar is for
short stories, whether from true life or works of fiction. Writing short
stories is different than writing long stories and novels. The below tips for
writing a good story are directed toward writing a good short story.
Tips for writing a good short
story
To make your short stories more
effective, try to keep in mind these pointers:
Have
a clear theme. What
is the story about? That doesn't mean what is the plot line, the sequence of
events, or the character's actions; it means what is the underlying message or
statement behind the words? Get this right and your story will have more
resonance in the minds of your readers.
Focus. The best stories are the
ones that follow a narrow subject line or idea. What is the point of your
story? Its point is its theme. It's tempting to digress, but in a 'short' story
you have to follow the straight and narrow otherwise you will end up with
either a novel beginning or a hodgepodge of ideas. Every detail you present
should reinforce your theme. Everything you put in the story should be
integral, nothing should be gratuitous. Remember John Steinbeck's advice to
"Know your story in 10 words before you tell it in 1000."
An effective short story covers
a very short time span. You can't fit in an entire life story, so focus on a
point in time, an experience, an idea, or a lesson learned. It may be one
single event that proves pivotal in the life of the character, and that event
will illustrate the theme.
Don't have too many characters
or events. Each new character or event will bring a new dimension to the story,
and for an effective short story too many diverse dimensions (or directions)
will dilute the theme. Have only enough characters and/or events to effectively
illustrate the theme or purpose of your story.
Make
every word count. There is no room for
unnecessary expansion in a short story. If each word is not working towards
putting across the theme or idea in the most effective way possible then delete
it or replace it with a better word.
Make the ending interesting. A
twist, something to make you think, a final profound thought, or a resolution
to make the reader feel satisfied.
Proof read! Nothing can kill a
potentially great story faster than bad grammar and spelling errors. Many
readers will not bother to continue reading if in the first few sentences they
encounter errors in your story. Careless errors, left for readers to stumble
on, make a statement that you do not care enough about your story to proof read
it. So then why should readers care enough to bother to read it? Rewrite.
Rewrite again. Great stories require hard work. Most great writers rewrite
their stories over and over again, each time improving it until they can no longer
find anything in their story that can be made better. Some writers can spend
hours just working on one sentence. A great idea for a story may come off the
top of your head onto the paper or the computer screen. But if you leave it
that way, exactly as you first wrote it, chances are no one will be very
impressed. Great stories, like great wine, need time. After you've first
written your story, give it time. Come back to it later and reread it. See if
there is something you can improve. Perhaps a sentence can be structured
differently to become more clear. Perhaps a more descriptive word can be used
here and there. Once you have improved everything you can think of in your
story, give it even more time to settle in your mind. Then come back to it
again, and rewrite it again, perfecting everything just a little more. If you
do this with every story you write, you will have a good chance of creating a
truly great story.
Write about what you know.
In general, if you want to write convincing stories, you should write about
what you know deeply, from your own EXPERIENCE. If you want to write
convincingly about what you haven't experienced, you should do intensive
research and interviews, and/or possess a world class imagination.
Use the above guidelines to
create a "map" for your story, a general idea of where you want to
go, but allow writing to be a process of discovery. The first sentence of the
story is crucial, since it hooks the reader, and often sums up the theme. Write
and rewrite your story until you are satisfied. Reading your story aloud is a
great way to comb out awkward language.
Burn this phrase into your
brain and act on it: Writers are readers! Remember the advice of Shakespeare's
contemporary Ben Johnson: "For a man to write well, there are required
three necessities: to read the best authors, observe the best speakers, and
much exercise of his own style."
Good stories provide a way of
bridging the silent gulf between people. They are a form of companionship and
an expression of what is most essential and meaningful about human life.
Express in your stories some of what you believe human life is all about.

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